Seated

When I first laid my

eyes upon you

As you took your seat

nearby

I thought to myself

quietly

Why oh why

has this stunning

creature come by-

 

With eyes of the

deepest, soulful brown

the voice of an angel

I was smitten from

the beginning

by your willful charm.

 

Now we often walk

arm in arm

which truly makes

me smile

as my heart

skips a beat

whenever you

take your seat

by my side

once again.

 

 

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Simple yet it moves you..:)

[Wicahpi]

Just sweet :)

[Tate Morgan]

Beautiful just beautiful

[Ladysue]

This is so beautiful. Your words are truly lovely and the feeling so fresh and happy. A wonderfully flawless flow.

[Angel Veselinov]

Touching and powerful poem Great job really liked it :) Thanks for sharing.

love is almost indescribable.

this is a sweet write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The moment two lovers meet is always one of the most cherished... it is amazing what parts stand out as reminders... really a beautiful and tender piece.

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, this was so tender and wonderful. Loved the feel of excitement in the anticipation, and the love that keeps alive each day. Such a joyful write!

[Michael X]

wow, this is the kind of poem that catches the reader off guard. I really enjoyed it, and the sudden coming into light. you are so talented siddartha

[Fabian G. Franklin]

lovely...i never get to see enough stunning creatures...birds mostly...all my friends are animals. lol