Captive!

Captive!

A Poem by Joshua Smit

Nowhere to run,
no place to hide,
countless thoughts
flash across my mind
each one leaves a mark,
each one causes pain

Is there an escape?
Can i break free
from this torture from my mind?

I cant stop the thoughts,
they wont go away
someone set me free!!

Can't go on much further, 
stressed to breaking point
can't do it alone,
Someone set me free

Lord
God almighty
king of the heavens,
lord of all creation,
Father set me free!!

© 2011 Joshua Smit


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very well put. it is a good poem. good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's a sense of speed and urgency in this. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2011
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Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa



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