violet dawn

violet dawn

A Poem by Joshua Smit

Brilliant colours, violet bright

shine to my delight

purple leaves, fying free

wonderfull to me


crowd the ground,

in a carpet soft

A most amazing sight


purple blue, on the move

canvassing the ground

Brilliant and bright,

A thankfull sight

© 2011 Joshua Smit

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I love the way that this flowed so very nicely. I like how you used the color violet in it and I thought that the way you said everything was amazing. A very good poem. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Excellent imagery and choice of language

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 31, 2011
Last Updated on October 31, 2011


Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa

i dont like talking bout myself :/ more..


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