Darkness up above

Darkness up above

A Poem by Joshua Smit

A dark cloud flies,

high a bove.

It casts a shadow

across the land

 

Murky dark,

Things unclear.

Light

is wiped away

Fearsome rule

Rides across the skies

 

The darkness

is cold.

The darkness

is hard.

hope, is hardly felt

 

Strong winds whip

across the land.

Darkened couds

dragged across the sky

 

Darkened blight, 

caught in flight.

hope, has been restored

© 2011 Joshua Smit


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well hope was restored, after all that darkness

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is my favorite so far. it tells a lot in the poem and it has such great detail that it felt like I was there watching your thoughts while you wrote this. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sparse prose that conveys so much detail and meaning in so few words.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 31, 2011
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Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa



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