Thoughtful

I'm just playing around hehe

She walked threw the forest calm as can be; wondering to herself why

she is here, where did she come from, and why is her life this way. She

stared at the markings on her hand as they changed from black to blue

to red, all while thinking of the trees around her as the wind brushed

threw them, making the last rain drops from afternoons rain to fall

slowly onto the nice moist grass.

"What are these markings here? surly they can't be some magical

nonsense? In my horrid life?" She whispered thoughtfully as if scared

to talk louder for she felt like she was being watched.

It was a horrid thought actually to think you were being watched. It

brought back memories from long times, scary stories you wish not to

think of and family members better left forgotten.

Even though the thought of being watched was scary, it was quite

peacfull in the forest. Away from all the other people as if this is the

only place i have ever been. It felt like home, more so then the small

house i live in.

I live in a quite small town surronded by forest and beyond that is more

small towns like ours. Beyond that i don't really know. All i know is our

small town of Forsanci (Four-San-She)

Author's Note

i'm just playing

Reviews

[Alysha]

It's a nice peice, it has a great flow and the words you use gives feels of otherworldliness. One thing that caused me some confusion was when you switch from talking about a person to talking about yourself. Other then that, however, and I thought it was great. Keep Writing.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

nice work cuzzy! I like your story. can't wait to read more of it. ^_^ love ya cuzzy!!

[r]

HiHi cuzzy!!! It's Meke!! I see you put ur story on here! Oh, and btw, i love you and this story! I'll reread it later, but keep on going!!! *glomps*

[Punk rocker]

great job