Intimate Friend

A souvenir of the past

Holding on One's desire

The truth seekers of life

Through thousand miles

I call to my mind

All joyous reminiscence

Flows from my spirit

You will be my inspiration 

Even you're not by side

I'm ready to give my hand

In any game we move

Running to finish line

And I'll wait the day

Till we meet again!

Author's Note

Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)

Reviews

[Becky]

I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

[ForeverNever]

A very different, unique style..I liked though:)
Thanks, continue writing:)

[Michael X]

that has an uplifting feeling that reflects a sense of perseverance, when an
idea offers the strength to move ahead, beautifully written and expressed.

[Pritesh]

A great poem by you!!!i really liked your poem!keep writing more like this!

[Celeste]

This is a great poem. The friend you made this ode to must be blessed to have a friend like you!

Keep writing!

[heels]

good stuff, i like. keep it up you're poems rock >.

[Brittany]

The words "you will be my inspiration, even 'when' you're not by 'my' side" really touched me. Short and well said. Thanks for posting.

[MoriartyMesa]

Kind of reminded me "Wheels in the Sky"

[Coyote Poetry]

"You will be my inspiration
Even you're not by side"
A beautiful and positive poem. Good to hold on to good memories and friends. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Suditi]

Awwww its such a beautiful poem.
Really sweet. :)

[Amata Luna]

Sweet and simple. Complex and true. That is you. To have a friend like that is surely remarkable and all I can say with this poem of yours is this: lovely. =)