Intimate Friend

A souvenir of the past

Holding on One's desire

The truth seekers of life

Through thousand miles

I call to my mind

All joyous reminiscence

Flows from my spirit

You will be my inspiration 

Even you're not by side

I'm ready to give my hand

In any game we move

Running to finish line

And I'll wait the day

Till we meet again!

Author's Note

Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)

Reviews

[Becky]

I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

[Desmund Tiny]

beloved friend... isa lang????? great write

[Lunar Star]

its amazing as all of the thers

[luna11]

I love this poem :D
Well written.
xx