KenShin

It's better to reversed my sword than point it out the edge

I lay down my feet to the ground

And look above the azure sky

To wish for relevance of my duty

Has a warrior of this century

 

To teach them,

Through sharp edge of my sword

I rather reversed it!

To give them a chance

 

Because No Warrior ever lived

In this unconscious world

Without a passion

For a vigorous mission

 

It’s hard to believe, but it’s true

Has being part of this society

I fight for those who’re weak

And a compassion for those who’re need

 

My heart understand the way

How my people cried out

Has along I breathe for love

I’m willing to give my hand

 

I promise! Till the end J

Author's Note

KenShin- is a japanese warrior name! Ken- means "Understanding or Sword" and Shin-means "Heart". I used this type of name is because my friend taught me about life! It seems little bit reality it based on her experience; Anyway! This for Thea Krizia my musashi and my one of my bestfriend! i hope you like this! ENJOY!! Thanks for review!

Reviews

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WOW so totally amazing, intriguing and interesting. I enjoyed the read.
I also agree with what coyote said.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because No Warrior ever lived
In this unconscious world
Without a passion
For a vigorous missionBecause No Warrior ever lived"
I like to read about other cultures belief. The Asia belief and thoughts are wonderful. I keep many books above me of old and great wisdom. I enjoyed this poem. A sword was a weapon of honor. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brittany]

A good lesson. To become a good warrior one has too look inside himself. Maybe for a regular person too.

[Queen Empress]

Very well penned!! i really liked it because you dedicated it to your friends!! keep it up!! i enjoyed reading all of your writings :))

[Pritesh]

Excellently done!i really like it!keep it up!

[Celeste]

This is a great poem. Yet another beautiful one for one of your friends! Your diction was great, it flowed smoothly with the whole thing.

Keep writing!

[Shy Girl]

Very well spoken ... life is funny that way. Speaks to us as we look backwards.. the message I recieve sometimes gets lost...I'm thinking... :) Nicely written :)

[Amata Luna]

Good words. Great lesson and the message itself underneath each line makes for something worth to look back again with life. Nicely done. Well written. *smiles* :))

This was a very interesting read- telling a deep story. Thank you for sharing :)

[Suditi]

A very well written piece dear.
The style, the flow, all great. :D