Road Paved to Hell

a breif poem i wrote for one of my stupid friends a while ago. sad thing is, she still doesn't get it

Here we are again
Running yourself into a wall
I tried
So desperately I tried
But you never cared
You lie with every word you speak
You take from every friend you keep
So how do you get angry
When all we do
Is call you out?
We saw through the façade
We heard through all the lies
You’re right
We can’t be your friends
After all, you never counted us among them
So do what you want
It’s your life
You only get one chance
To f**k it up right
So congrats
You did it
Are you happy now?
This time, we won’t be here when you return
We don’t want to hear what he did to you
We don’t want to hear how well you’re screwing up
Just remember
When you’re all alone
And he’s gone
(Cuz guess what,
He hates this s**t too)
I’m going to laugh
Hysterically
Because you did this to yourself

Author's Note

I already know it doesn't rhyme. it's not supposed to.

Reviews

[Katarina Bondinell]

eeeveryone loves an angry "I'll tell you what" poem. =)

[Jessica Dallaire]

I adore this poem. It's great. ^^

[Vox Machina]

"You lie with every word you speak
You take from every friend you keep"

That's an awesome line. I like the symmetry, you lie, you speak, you take, you keep. Well written.

[Czar Lyrus]

Oooh! Vividly angry! I hung on to each word-maybe because I had a "friend" who is the same way. I like how I can relate to this piece; I especially love the ending. Spectacular!