blood falls

blood falls

A Poem by Angel of the devil

as she hears 
the words 
that stab her 
heart

over and over
sharp and painful
than anything
to her

blood falls 
onto the floor

as she 
cries
her eyes 
out

blood falls 

© 2016 Angel of the devil


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Wow, very strong write. I can feel sadness in this write,

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very strong use of words. I felt the sadness and the emotions bleed in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

3 Years Ago

thank you very much!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Tears from a place so deep down inside us that they may as well be the very crimson cells that keep us alive.
Visceral piece Rose.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

3 Years Ago

thank you tony
Yes blood and tears.. the recipe for life

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

3 Years Ago

thank you for your review
Wow. Sad but powerful. A reality for so many. Thank you for sharing with us. ...:::)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

3 Years Ago

thank you so much!!!!!
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....
Angel of the devil

3 Years Ago

i wrote this for a friend......

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Angel of the devil
Angel of the devil

East Anglia , United Kingdom



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