bit∙ter∙sweet (bĭt'ər-swēt) vb:

music lover, sonic bliss.. enshiver me, melodic kiss

bit∙ter∙sweet (bĭt'ər-sw�"t) vb:
01.29.10

our fingers
forgetting whose hands they belonged to
found refuge from confusion
in one-another’s soft contours

as we stood under sleeping light bulbs
like dark buds awaiting spring
and the ambient night pressing
through our silent space
the only sounds
your breath
whispered openness
and the shy song of your lips
touching a single note to my neck

this motionless dance aching not to end
perhaps knowing
once the music was over
it would never play again

Reviews

[Hollywood]

Amazing poem. Favorite lines: "and the shy song of your lips
touching a single note to my neck." Bravo.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. The story was very good in your words. Each line adding to a strong ending to your poem. I like the complete poem. Ending was outstanding.
Coyote

[there is no more from m..]

this is an amazing poem i enjoyed this poem

[Jennika has a short att..]

This is probably my favorite out of your work so far. Nice use of the senses to paint a picture in the reader's head. I don't know why but when I saw the title to the poem I instantly began singing 'Just the Girl' by the Click 5