Cut Me Open Again

I feel this razor dragging through me

A tug at my heart and out my lungs

Leaving scars and tracks and broken veins

All things no one will see

Unless someone cuts me open again.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Pain is hidden in many ways. Some on the inside and some have scars that are permanent for the few chosen to see. A excellent poem. New wounds will come. The scars are battle wounds to teach us to be careful and go slowly into love.
Coyote

[Ethan Paz]

Very deep. No one can know the pain someone is feeling till you know the person hurt. Good job.

[Sofia N]

Wow I love it. The imagery is awesome, even though is short it definitely carrys on a meaning . Nice piece :)

[Zombeh]

short, but it actually says alot. I like the simplicity in this that actually translates to a more deeper and meaningful message. Keep it up :)

[Mudkipz]

This was a good read, and like the other two said, it's full of emotion, and you can feel it when you are reading.

[Closed Account]

This is really good. It's very emotional, and it makes you feel what you were thinking when you wrote it. Great job! :)

[deeps]

I like this, it expresses real emotion.
I can feel the deepwounds that are lying there open.
Very well written write.