Alone
A Poem by J. Lynn
Silence,
it surrrounds me.
Everywhere I go,
no one else knows.
Its' only me,
and earth.
The silence is still,
yet it peaces my mind.
Birds are happy,
even when I cry.
The pain goes away,
when I lay and think.
Nothing can control me,
or make me weep.
© 2011 J. Lynn
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I saw depth in your in your words indeed. Alone, it's totally lonliness. loved few lines,
Silence,
it surrrounds me.
Everywhere I go,
no one else knows.
Its' only me,
and earth.....
depth is there in above stanza i'd say indeed. well written about "Alone".
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I saw depth in your in your words indeed. Alone, it's totally lonliness. loved few lines,
Silence,
it surrrounds me.
Everywhere I go,
no one else knows.
Its' only me,
and earth.....
depth is there in above stanza i'd say indeed. well written about "Alone".
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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