Chalk Zone

I met a girl that is an Aquarius.

I’m a Cancer

And it was various

Because I was curious...
She vibes like me.

And if I were a woman,

She is who I might just be.

Go to sleep,

So I can make you dream.

I want to make you fiend just as you make me!

She is more splendid than the weather in December when the snow falls.

My heart began to fall the very first day we began to talk.

You make me want to draw our names out on the concrete with colorful chalk.

Chalk zone,

I can create our own home.

Better that,

Our own world!

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Chalk Zone-- My kids loved that show, and for years my driveway and sidewalks were covered with pictures from their imaginations and dreams. I know they wanted to be able to jump right in. That is what I see here. You are wanting to create your happy ever after home for her and jump into a world of your own making with just one little piece of chalk. It would be lovely if we could do that.

[sinNsincerity]

Ah, I'm glad you caught it. I've been waiting to see if anyone knew that show.
It would be lovely indeed. I love your review! thank you for reading Jan!

[nazia]

I have no idea about chalk zone but what you write is simply spell binding David. Awesome. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much. Always a pleasure

[~]

Ohh.. no idea Chalk Zone was a kid show.. all i could think was a dead body on the asphalt and chalk all around -- well, now I know (grinning sheepishly) and I am happy it is a happy one :)

[sinNsincerity]

Now I'm thinking about dead bodies

[Stephie.Santi]

Short but deep i'm speechless

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ms.

[sereenaoutloud]

fantastic pIece...i love how you pulled on all the little things like the horoscope, the chalk...so cute.!! I agree you have a way with love poems, such a romantic is SweetSin :))

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena! There's still more to come and I hope you enjoy those as well. =D

[Isabel25]

So basically u met your soul mate? I like the title the best. Chalk zone..never really knew those chalk doodles by couples had a name. Or did u make that up? Whatever it is i like it!
You have a way with love poems David...keep it up :)

[sinNsincerity]

Not sure if I found a soul mate just yet, I think every woman I meet is hehe
Chalk Zone used to be a kids television a long time ago. They would draw things with chalk and things would come to life, so I borrowed the concept a tad bit.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it Annie =D
Thank you for reading!

[Isabel25]

I have never heard of that programme. But well , I really enjoyed this :))

[s y e]

This is really good. I thoroughly enjoyed the structure of this one.
You have the ability to capture the readers and hold them until the end.
Great job, Sin.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Ms. Noodlehead. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it and I appreciate what you thought about it.

[TheOne&Only]

Great Piece...it can take someone into a day dream :)

[sinNsincerity]

If it could, that would be awesome!
Thank you for reading hon. =D

[Real Inspiration]

This is really good. As I'm reading I'm imagining it all, it's so perfect.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you think so.
Thank you for reading.
Always appreciated!

[Real Inspiration]

Anytime. I love reading as well as writing.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW It's something so refreshing and Heart touching. I enjoyed reading it A lot. Amazing. Your work is Fabulous *_* "She is more splendid than the weather in December when the snow falls." WOW Beautiful line.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you hon, always love hearing what you think.

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME :)