Vdara

Shivery, lust, and bad attitudes...

Were all on the menu

Yester-moon.

It was rather a great late afternoon…

Your lipstick shade decayed the day

Along with harpooning the mood.

And we shared stage frights

Until the stars met our eyes.

Oh my,

           The kiss you left on my chest was bliss!

No, it was much more Ms.

I savored every inch of it

Knowing it wouldn’t remain,

But to me…

It was sacred.

It was painless.

It was the perfect silence.

And “it”

Wasn’t afraid to welcome in the rain ---

It said , “chime in.”

It was a perfect harmony like a wind chime

When our souls met.

Some will say our love is a crime,

But I don’t mind.

Because

                     I love you.

And you..?

Hummingbird

Nectar,

The reason why my neck hurts!

That’s magical like

The Mayan temples,

And when

They re...discover

This Love,

It will uncover a new

Category list

Of philosopher.

Reviews

[JayceeC]

You really write great beat poetry..I wants to be read allowed. The rhythm pulls me through even when there's a line that I want to question, and so it deserves another read. On second read I started really looking at the contradictions. . Decay and harpooning are hallmarks of somrthing dying, but as I read on it was clearly not the intent. Then the crime..made me think..why? Why is it a crime? Byond that I enjoyed the tumble of metaphors you used to build this. Only dicover should be discovered. Your creativity is to be commended.

[sinNsincerity]

Nice, my goal was to give that rhythm and beat, so that is would be a pleasure to read and do exactly what you said: to pull you in. The love is a crime because it differs from the ordinary norm Love. That why in the end I say when it is discovered it would have to be studied...
Thank you for reading Jaycee!

[TheOne&Only]

Love this...it struck some cords in me that almost made me cry. It touched me and that's very hard to do,...I envy you! Lol..

[sinNsincerity]

Why do you envy me for?

[TheOne&Only]

How you can write so beautifully & well designed (if that makes sense) lol.

[sinNsincerity]

You just have to keep practicing. Repetition is key just like anything else you want to be good at.
I'm majoring in English, so I've studied a lot of literature and writing.
All I can truly say is write like yourself and find your voice. Don't be or try to write like anyone else.
That's what I do.

[TheOne&Only]

Thanks for the tip. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Just don't stop writing no matter what. You are GOOD. =D

[AaronFreitas]

Great flow my friend... Love the way you write and think!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Aaron! Always appreciated man.

[Rei Ta]

Wow, mesmerizing!! Loved the expression in this! Refreshing to read!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Loretta! I'm happy to hear that you thought so!

[sereenaoutloud]

this is fantastic and for me the "girl" is the city, the lights the, hotels and amazing views so breathtaking !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank You Sereena for seeing that. I told you it was kinda magical.lol

[sereenaoutloud]

you mean my weirdness was right ? lol you know I am a fan of your writing but yes this piece was magical indeed my friend! :))

[wordman]

a beautiful story of love my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Sir!

[wordman]

yu are welcome sin

[Jamestown]

Another great piece my friend, you do chose some unusual wording
but you tie it all together very well, you are definitely unique when
it comes to describing the scene, great job! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading James! Will most definitely hit you up when I get back from Vegas!

[Isabel25]

I am trying to get a mental picture of this female, whose mere lipstick shade can decay the day and harpoon the mood, who can unearth new categories of philosophers and theoreticians! She must surely be one hell of a girl!
The greatest love stories are never usually meant to last, maybe that is a good thing too...I don't know...now you have put a new thought in my mind Sin!

[sinNsincerity]

That alone is worth is, a new thought in your head!
Thank you for reading Annie, I really appreciate it!

[Destiny Dreamer]

It's Beautiful and Romantic Poem! It's more like the Lyrics to the song! LOVE IT! ^_^ I love the line "Some will say our LOVE is a Crime, But I don't mind. Because I love You" It's too DEEP! I felt this line so deeply!

[sinNsincerity]

That's really amazing that it made such an impact! That makes me smile!
Thank you for reading =D

[Destiny Dreamer]

U are WELCOME! ^_^