My Rubik's Cube

Allow me to decipher your heart.

Let me take it apart.

From the start,

From first to last,

From future to past.

Let’s not glorify it,

Allow us to start from scratch.

Forget it babe,

Let’s bury the hatch!

I’ll always sit with you

And hold your hand.

No plans of ruthless schemes

Or scams.

You leave me so high…

I don’t ever want to land!

Let us just go about,

Out in the clouds and such…

Let us travel the world,

Or we can just stay,

At far?

Never that!

My heart?

You can have it!

Reviews

[DeathIsRelease]

I really like the poem the rhyming was good, I like "Let's bury the hatch I'l always sit with you and hold your hand." Between lovers I think it's cute because couples fight a lot and get upset easily and I think he's saying to skip the fighting I think it's so cute. I also really like your ending it's simple but meaningful

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you saw that message in it.
Thank you for reading!

[nazia]

The short sentence, few words used and the rhyme give an edge to your poem and makes it quite unique. The ending , the way you ask the question and answer on your own is fabulous. You are such a romantic :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm beginning to use different styles to draw the reader in and hold them.
I believe this one worked well in doing so.
Thank you so much for reading Nazia!

[nazia]

Yes it has... I loved the format

[Tom McRoberts]

I'm really enjoying your poetry. Tell me though, the poem's called 'My Rubik's Cube', and in the second line you wish to take her heart apart. Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought that was cheating? Aha!

[sinNsincerity]

Very good point hehe, but I'm taking her apart to see what's she's about.
Thank you for reading once again.

[Madhu]

Beautifully written and an amazing title! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Madhu!

[E G TEN]

Ha! Your such a sweet talker, writing about love is like my
Knowledge in rubiks cube i can only do one side, perhaps
Someday i could do the other side.. As always your as cool as ice
Hommie! Thanks for sharing :-)

[sinNsincerity]

Mos deff.
Thank you for reading EGT

[Ana B.]

A very beautiful, endearing piece about the sweetest feeling. Gorgeous :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ana for spending the time to read. Always appreciated!

[child of God]

I love this write the title is so clever the flow is beautiful thank you for sharing my freind

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you thought so. Thank you for reading!

[Einahpets2012]

[Ishita Dixit]

My heart?
Your poem owned!

Great write!

[sinNsincerity]

Did it really? =D
Thank you for reading Ishita!

[Ishita Dixit]

completely! :P

[s y e]

The title for this one is perfection!
I love this one, love the story and emotion.
The last two lines speak for everyone!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so, I thought it would be quite clever to name it that.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I really appreciate it!