My Rubik's Cube

Allow me to decipher your heart.

Let me take it apart.

From the start,

From first to last,

From future to past.

Let’s not glorify it,

Allow us to start from scratch.

Forget it babe,

Let’s bury the hatch!

I’ll always sit with you

And hold your hand.

No plans of ruthless schemes

Or scams.

You leave me so high…

I don’t ever want to land!

Let us just go about,

Out in the clouds and such…

Let us travel the world,

Or we can just stay,

At far?

Never that!

My heart?

You can have it!

Reviews

[DeathIsRelease]

I really like the poem the rhyming was good, I like "Let's bury the hatch I'l always sit with you and hold your hand." Between lovers I think it's cute because couples fight a lot and get upset easily and I think he's saying to skip the fighting I think it's so cute. I also really like your ending it's simple but meaningful

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you saw that message in it.
Thank you for reading!

[Real Inspiration]

"My heart? You can have it!" I love the ending.

[sinNsincerity]

Did you!? Thank you for reading.
I'm happy that you loved it =D

[Real Inspiration]

Yeah. :) You're a really good writer.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Out standing .... Love it :) I love the emotions :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you loved it hon! Thank for reading!

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work, fluent, fun and free flowing,
Even has a bit of romance, keep up the good work,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm doing my best man! thank you for reading!

[613]

This was very well written. Nice job!

- Brittney

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Brittney!

[JayceeC]

Great beat poem written about love, and the respect that goes hand in hand with it Only thing I see is that I'd change "At far" to "Afar". Keep it up, these seem just to be rolling out. Jan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jan, I'm glad you've been enjoying them!

[sereenaoutloud]

awwwww so romantic is this write Sweet Sweet Sin (double sweetness for this write) It is beautiful and great title!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena!
You're the best =D

[sereenaoutloud]

awww BFF Sweet Sin :))

[TheOne&Only]

...Very touching and for a 'Sucker For Love' as I am to be,...I have no complaints,...I love it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you hon.
I really appreciated it a lot!

[wordman]

sounds like your in love my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Haha, Thanks for reading sir.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Isabel25]

This is such a cute poem David. It is simple and it is playful and it is quirky. Love the Rubic's Cube metaphor. Genius! :D

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Annie.
Always thankful for your reviews!

[AaronFreitas]

"Let us travel the world, Or we can just stay, At far? Never that! My heart? You can have it!" I love those lines... I am in that same boat if I can find that right woman. Good work my friend :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Aaron! Glad you loved those lines.