My Dream

You turned the sunshine into rain

This pain needs no exclaim.

We began tossing and skipping rocks into

an ocean of potholes...

Submerged our smiles in the shallow

We turned rainbows into pots of gold.

I was born in love with you!

I asked you for the thunderstorms

And catastrophes you kissed upon me...

Reviews

[Rana]

Always end up admiring how bright and lively the imagery your words paint turns out. It's as if one can feel the shine, colors, splashes, thunders and the quake springing from soft touch spoken of here. So picturesque is your land from where you glean pieces to present us!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Rana!

[sereenaoutloud]

This is so beautiful i especially love
"i was born in love with you"
Such a beautiful concept that there is the someone made just for you! :)
Love this you truly are the Bestest! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena! It always warms me up when I hear from you!

[sereenaoutloud]

awww blush...that is too sweet! Right back @ ya bestie! :)

[TheOne&Only]

Just beautiful. Thats all I have to say ...Beautiful! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you hon!

[silent poet]

I love this!!! ( I was born in love with you, I asked for the thunderstorms" :) truly love this!! IT'S PERFECT.. in description of all you felt

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much! =D

[silent poet]

you're very welcome :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Awesome wording, this is powerful love
and I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[Caladoscope]

"Catastrophes you kissed upon me..." Great damn line!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Mrs. Caladoscope!

[Melinda McQueen]

Such a love poem. The beauty in your words captured love in its truest form.
A nice write.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Melinda!