Wishful Truth

She's the sweet sticky honey

That resides in the confines of my bee hive mind.

Oh my my my...

The residue...

My Mrs. Pooh

You roar when I don't give you a taste

of what I'm thinking...

The sum of a wishful truth.

Reviews

[Meraki]

I really like this. I understand it. I can relate to it, mainly because I do it myself. It's great. Nice work. I'm sorry it took me so long to review it. I tried reading your other requests but they were a bit to sexual for my tastes. Again, great work. Thank you for sharing this with me.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Meraki for reading, and I'm glad that you do understand it.

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I love the opening lines! The whole poem is adorable.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so Lynn! =D

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I like the use of pooh and the honey. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I am really glad you did like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sara]

Oh my my my, indeed. I really enjoyed your poem. Especially "you rawr when I don't give you a taste of what I'm thinking". Congrats :)

[sinNsincerity]

hehe That is so amazing to hear, thank you Sara! I really happy to hear that you enjoyed it. =D
read morehehe That is so amazing to hear, thank you Sara! I really happy to hear that you enjoyed it. =D
I'll be fine if I just don't get eaten alive.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm wondering it its clover honey? A tasty beauty!

Regards,
Al

[sinNsincerity]

Whichever you like hehe
Thank you Al!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very good, I love it, short but good and well found. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Rudi!

[Rana]

This tasted great, haha, sweet and delightful. Another amazing original metaphor from the grand bee hive! Keep them buzzing. The wishful world's certainly got its own enticing sparkle.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Rana! I really glad you enjoyed it. =D

[E G TEN]

Awesome write Sin. "my bee hive mind" like that one much,
And finished it off with some roaring truth. Cool bro!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much EG, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[child of God]

This is quite a beautiful write my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you.

[child of God]

No problem

[JayceeC]

Great creativity in this one, Sin. The simple metaphor is very relatable yet unique. It makes me think "I wish I'd thought of that."

[sinNsincerity]

hehe, Thank you so much Jan. =D

[Kajal Sharma]

awwwww that is kind of cute

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!