Quite Acquainted

Make me feel so good...

No favors

Por favor-

It's all about the love ain't it

Visions of you naked

While I guzzle on the

Minds of the ancients

Don't contemplate

Just be great

Full

But I'm so full

And fed up with all your bull

Sipping on God’s blessings

But the devil has me

In a drunken stupor

When I dive into

Hot springs

Then I spring out

No clouds

Just clear tears veered

When you nearly gazed

Right through these red eyes

Did you fear when you revered

The silk and shear?

Attain it

Don't blame him

Blame me!

Tag,

(YOUR IT)

Reviews

[B]

Sometimes i feel that the devil thing
Most people just act wrong then blame it on the devil
Truth is
We are in so much control
That the devil is ever so small
I love this write
Sometimes a woman can be so bad inside
She can take you places you should never go
Devil or none devil
Its your choice

[sinNsincerity]

I don't blame him, more so embrace pieces of him and I feel that it's necessary.
Everything in existence has polarity. The pendulum swings back and forth, so to be good and evil is a must for me... I must loose myself to find myself and that's a cycle that'll only help me rise up and grow. The issue is not getting trapped.
I believe the devil is just as big as God and I would be a fool to think not.
Thank you so much for your insight Nisreen. It's more than what others give.
I always appreciate it!

[T. R. Ash]

I thought that your argument here is "Embrace pieces of the devil". because whatever it is that you believe in- the devil, bad luck- we have all have pieces of these. Along with 'god' and 'good luck'

[sinNsincerity]

we do carry both and there's no denying it, at least for me, to grow and be a better person...

[Charlotte e.e. Griffiths]

All of your work is very passionate and meaningful! It almost feels like it could be a rap - please do not take offense to that, but it pertains very closely to that style and I could imagine you could take your writing a lot further in that regard if you wished!

[B]

i guess my religious beliefs are personal
but i do not embrace the devil no .......

[Une coccinelle]

I like reading this piece fast. The rhythm is great!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for spending the time to read, I highly appreciate it!

[...]

It's been a while S&S...and I have been missing out :) I love this! Balance, being in the "now" aware of both "good" and "bad" and being...well, just being, is "God" I think :)

[sinNsincerity]

It's totally all about balance and just having peace within and with myself.
You were spot on.
Thank you for spending the time to read and leave me your thoughts Lynn.
I always appreciate it!

[AaronFreitas]

This is awesome buddy... I love the thoughts. I know what you mean brother... we live in a world where the devil is trying to do as much damage as possible... always testing our faith. I like your spin on this and how your creativity shines through. You have a unique style that you own... keep at it!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for that dude! I try not to put the blame on him though because at the I'm the one who makes the choice to follow temptation. It's a blessing that God gave me that choice.

[SheIsMe]

I imagined hearing this to a steady beat. It flowed so well. I absolutely loved the end. So strong and fed up. Great piece.

[sinNsincerity]

I highly appreciate that. Thank you very much.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

'It's all about love ain't it'

So right, Sin in Sincerity. Most of our writings talk about love, the beauty of it, the sadness sometimes it brings. Well done. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Most definitely, Thank you Sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild ride in your words.
"Don't blame him
Blame me!
Tag,"
I like the ending.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sir, glad you'd enjoyed it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[wordman]

sin,a very interesting write,i really related and enjoyed it

[sinNsincerity]

That's amazing Sir, I'm so happy that you found it relatable.

[Emily]

Great poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Emily!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

This is so nakedly honest. Again i love your style and tone, but this one comes off more raw that usual, i can only guess its the material that forces that. But good God Sin, you have more talent in your finger than a lot have in their whole being.

[sinNsincerity]

I love being nakedly honest. Just imagine the things I haven't built up to say yet...
You always make me smile Crystal. Thank you so much for your words, they mean the world to me!

[olyvia]

so much suspense in this! sobriety can be so hard to conquer

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Olive!