Queen of Gotham

I was in possession of her,

But I was the one who was possessed.

The progressiveness regressed from within

-It was suisin.

It was her lips that made me quit.

Heart Barbarians.

Fighting to defend,

But the end result is

-DESTROY.

Forever to decay

Always displayed on a stage,

And the act was never the issue.

So sublime; yet, it's a beautiful issue.

Claps and tissues

Roses and bows

Crucify and crown

My mind that dwells on your

Swollen hell

While,

My Goddess taps into my

Shell of a heart.

Shark Week,

You came to devour on

Me.

Please love me.

I'm weak.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Intriguing, dirty, dark, control, captivating all words that came to mind upon reading this. I like this very much.

The flow is effortless and your words are carefully woven, paints a number of images in minds canvas.
Congratulations on a stunning work.

Ngā mihi maioha (warmest regards)
Rach x

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so, and for spending the time to read as well as leaving me your thoughts, I highly appreciate that!

[Sarah Wilson]

Wow! Powerful and flows very well! I love the metaphors and imagery you use in this!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Sarah, I love to hear that because that's all I wanted to provide.

[Elmarie]

Your welcome :)

[wordman]

it reminded me of exactly what it is,you think you're in control when indeed your not
you get devoured in your helplessstate of false control

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, the ups and downs that motions all on its on. I find peace in it now in days.
Thank you so much Sir, your words are always appreciated my friend!

[GalaxyGhost]

The rhythm is nice like a rap song and I noticed that there seems to be a bunch of rhymes scattered throughout the poem in a way that makes it melodic.

[sinNsincerity]

The ebb and flow gives the poem life and I did not intend for it to sound like a rap song, but that's kool either way though.