My Father

It's my father's birthday. Thought I'd write a poem for him!

I love my father

An honest man, a good friend

A helping hand

 

Familiar, caring

Nothing keeps us apart now

Sharing words, happy

 

Birds of a feather

We grow older together

Can’t live forever

Time stops for no one

The passage is long, I'm strong

I hope he stays too

 

While I’ve written

His hair greys, his skin wrinkles

But he remains here

 

Still, love my father

From the bottom of my heart

After all these years

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Jackie]

As i read these lines i can sense the purity and deepness of them..truly beautiful

[A Kid]

This poem is so pure. I love it. Nothing wrong with it. Also, I love your username.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice and he sounds like a lovely man. I wished I had memories with my father.

[wordman]

the bond of family,should always pravail

[Chris Shaw]

Very nicely composed. The sincerity came through, I felt it.

Chris

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you Christine!

[A.G.]

Happy birthday to your father 😊 I'm sure he's very blessed and proud to have you as his son. Lovely write. He will be very happy to hear this I'm sure 😊💛 thank you for sharing your heart with us.
-ANGELINA 🖤

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you Angelina, that's kind of you to say!

[A.G.]

Your welcome Jack (:

[Najam Us Saher]

Very Happy birthday to your father. May god bless him with good health and a long life.
This is heart touching and a beautiful gift for him.
Did you show him yet? What did he say?
How are you?

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I'm going to show him the poem tonight during dinner. I told him I wrote it, but he hasn't seen it quite yet. I've been pretty good, I'm taking a poetry course for one semester, and it's very cathartic for me. It's been a while since we've talked, how've you been Najam?

[Najam Us Saher]

Do tell me how he reacted. I am sure he will be proud of you.
I am fine, been busy publishing my book.
I am very happy to hear about the poetry course, tell me more about it, I'd love to listen.

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So you love your father so dearly! He is surely a very very good Dad. Happy Birthday to him! And loved this sweet poem from a son to father. I suggest, read this poem to him... It would be a beautiful birthday gift!
Good Luck!

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you! I'll definitely share it with him!