Zombie

An Echo Verse poem. My first.

There’s a bullet hole in this soulless world

Echo - sword

That cuts and wades through flesh of better days

Echo - dismay

The world sways under the covers, a restless vessel of life

Echo - blight

That circumcised my blinded eyes and diagonal horizon, vertical surgical circles

Echo - Worthless

That resurrect the devil in my voiceless vocal cords and string me up by neck in voidless morgue

Echo - forward

On to the devil’s dance, I take my chance with death’s inception recollected on my breath

Echo - Left

To my own devices and crimson sirens that yell melodies of hellhound serenity vivid vasectomy

Echo - Nephilim  

Next to my corpses that orders the northern lights like Wight’s that fight into moonlight

Echo - alive

And pretend they can mend their pasts of castration, and after death baptisms in time's wrath and laughter

Echo - Disaster

And echo the neglect to dissect yet another brother to embody the book of Solomon

Echo - Holocaust 

And master the way to live another day after losing the will or ability to do so

Echo - comatose

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

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So I finally got some time to go go through this new piece. Looks nice, new to your style and interesting... I think you can explain your echoes a bit more. I made it a bit complicated in the middle as I was confused but then again on the track when I approached towards the ending.
Keep it up, Good Luck!

[wordman]

echoes of life and tragedies will always be an echo

[Ghost writer]

that's sad, I like the progression.

[Onlyme]

Very poetic, story type poem. That flowed to perfection and had an interesting style and concept. Enjoyed reading this a lot. The more I read it the more I got into the flow and style of it more. Like a mantra that needs to be said a few times.