Pictures of the Past

Pictures of the Past

A Poem by SinnerInspired
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This is about my family

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Lately things have seemed to be all confusing
They seem unreal
I'm looking at the black& white pictures of when we were little
We were all little& innocent
We use to fight for hours but 2 minutes later we would make up& we'd be driving our parents crazy
Who would've thought that one day all that would change

Now it seems that were rivals& strangers
Sometimes we walk past each other& don't even mention a hello
We use to be inseparable like Pb&j
But now we just can't seem to be together in one room
Just when we all started to get along all that happiness got ruined in one minute
Our anger took control over our hearts

Its like a war that never seems to end
I never thought i'd have to choose sides to be with my family
If you don't choose your alone
How can it be fixed?
How can we go back to being one family?

I know looking at these pictures isn't gonna help solve anything
I know i have to look at who we are now
But i like to escape the horrible truth for a while& look at who we used to be

© 2011 SinnerInspired


Author's Note

SinnerInspired
It doesn't rhyme...

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poems dont always have to rhyme, non rhyming poems are just as good as the rhyming ones. I know how you feel family conflicts are horrible. You did an amazing job on this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


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poems don't have to rhyme - in fact I often prefer when they don't - this is a great example - I think it would take away from the power of the piece - which is strong and heartfelt - great write - family conflicts can be troublesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The family conflicts you pen here make so much sense, and is really realatble, pleasure to read :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's beautiful :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 24, 2011
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SinnerInspired

Mid-City, CA



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Hey im SinnerInspired im a poet Im not that good not that bad. I like writing, a lot! Message me if you'd like. Sorry if I don't get to all the read requests. But i'll try to get to each one as soon a.. more..

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