Hated At Birth

Hated At Birth

A Poem by SinnerInspired

Nothing left to gain, Nothing left to lose
Life is what you choose
Rebellious criminal your being accused
Your a thief who admits their crimes without an excuse

You hate the fuzz
They think their all tough with all them guns
Sirens go on& on
But by the time they reach your house you'l be gone

Momma says your not worth a dime
Your just a waist of time
Old man can't pay bills, can't take it anymore
Your sister pitches in by working part time as a w***e

Do you dig, or do I need to paint you a picture
They hate me: my mom, my dad& my sister
Ima runaway who moves from place to place
My folks always kick me out cause I take up space

You get locked up& no one bails you out
Its no surprise, you should know this by now
You spend your nights to steal& your mornings to sell
Boy, aint' life swell?

© 2011 SinnerInspired

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Life can become so sad and lonely,
environment, surroundings, family and friends can make life good or bad...

I feel for the narrator/you here...

Excellently written

Posted 9 Years Ago

love the rawness and honesty you present

Posted 10 Years Ago

I like the honesty in this piece, the last stanza really caught my attention. You did an excellant job on this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hard way to live in this poem. I like the honest and direct language in this poem. Sometime we must learn from the mistakes of others. I like the ending to the excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's beautiful, sad and beautiful. Very touching.
Keep it up! *thumbs up*

Posted 10 Years Ago

hmm, i like this. More like life now, specially down where am living ¬_¬ Anyway, good write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on August 21, 2011
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