Lost in the clouds

My desire.

Do you understand all this
I have lost sight and can't recall.
since I'm afraid there's something that I'll miss
Please watch out for me and make sure that I don't fall. 

There's birds in the sky and I'm lost in the clouds
Just trying to figure out what this world means
Its like a black mist that depresses those that it enshrouds 
Looking at all the angles searching the in-betweens.

But I think I see my aim again
I'm fighting out this dark cover
And while you are a ten
I see now you'll never be my lover

And so I get up and get over it
It's all good I only need myself
I'll make my own happiness and I'll be as happy as it gets.   
I'll live my life to the fullest while you live yours yourself.

I'll forget what the world said and I'll live my way
They don't know what makes me happy
They have selfish aim anyway
But I will find my own way you all shall see

I'll go to her and hold her by the hand, 
I'll go to happiness and grab her by the waist
We shall walk side by side in the sand
And all of her time she'll want me to waste.

Cuz she will find me worthy and I shall be ecstatic
and it will be known surely that we possess loves magic

I'll go to the water and see the significance thereof
I'll not be told that it's a simple molecule when it's the reason I'm alive
And her lapping at my feet is what I'll love
And deep into her waters I'll dive and strive.

And you scoff not seeing the magnificence, and youll ponder at my enthusiasm
But this I love and it's very essence, it's a deeper feeling of expression than my hearts chasm. A feeling deeper than just some orgasm.

For the world we live in finds sex  as love
But there's so much more to her like the reason behind her smile
She Is more faithful than the dove
There's no evil in her to harm or defile.

The kind of beauty in which you stare into her eyes
The kind of emotion where you don't care about imperfection
The heart that stops but never dies
80 million times more amazing than her own reflection

For she's not so shallow that her looks are her only beauty
Though if they were they alone would speak much
And while people would speak shrewdly
I'm the one who can her heart touch

She is mine and I am hers
Beyond earthly in the next realm
Cuddled next to her like it were winter and she were furs
I would protect her through it all, I would be her helm. 

My heart yearns for such a love
This ecstasy beyond fantasy
No desire burns quite like this..love!
The thought of such steals my sanity!

And this is a love beyond all desire!
This is my souls very essence of Fire!
And she burns through my skin like a flame!
And I'm the only one she's ever told her name....

Author's Note

I love this one a lot and would love to see what you think of it?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"And her lapping at my feet is what I'll love
And deep into her waters I'll dive and strive."
You went in many good directions in the poem. This is the kind of love we need and we will appreciate. The poem was beautiful and had the feel of the great writers of the past. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I like the poem, you've done a great job writing so much about the theme. But perhaps you should consider revising the lines a bit, so that all four lines in a single stanza are similar in length. That would give you a pretty good rhythm, I believe.
But it's a good poem overall.

[SuicidePact.]

wow this was awesome!

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice work ;) I like it a lot.