Upto you

I kinda like these lyrics!!

You never understood what's lurking

Beneath my crooked smile

You never could have guessed

What's going on for a while

 

You could never find out

What I've now become

All you could do is wait

Just wait till it's all done

 

It's so cute, so sweet

No floor beneath my feet

I guess I finally know how it feels to fly

 

I think I've lost control

I've finally opened the door

To all the secrets buried deep inside

 

Oh! I know

I just know

You feel the same , you do!

By the way, when you smile

You look so deadly cute

I believe that you like

The person I've become

And I just can't wait

Till everything's done

Till everything's told

Till everything's shared

Till you finally get to know

What's been over my head

Till everything's sung

There's so much left to do

I'm done playing my part

And now it's upto you 

 

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Author's Note

Hey!! I like this!! Mainly the verses!!
What about you guys???

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

This was sooooooooooooo cute! I LOVED IT!!!
You can rhyme ALOT better then I can, which is saying something lol.
I LOVED THIS CUTE LITTLE SONG! You really should make a recording of you singing it. Just reading it like a poem is no fun :D
Good job! 100++++++++!!!!!!!!!!!

[chloe cruz]

I really like this, like you! The verses are very witty and sweet. They rhyme well...

Great job and sorry this review was super short!