Down the Life's Procellous Paths

For the group 'Creative Poetry'.

Down the life’s procellous paths

Moments come but never last

Spiritual outreach to the heavens above

Blithe and burdened with hate and love

Tears with their unexpected outpour

Magical feelings and hopes that soar

Elated smiles and misty eyes

Forever, on the path, they lie

Too far, an end; Too soon, it comes

Frayed ends are finally undone

But a single moment truly lived

Is worth all and more, the risk

Author's Note

Back to rhyming, I guess. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Procellous Paths are good words. I had to research. I like the poem. I like the feel and energy of the poem. Last line is true. If something is risky. It is more fun to overcome. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Silent Lover]

Fantastic. I enjoyed most the hint of ambition that this poem gave to me.

[Raven Starhawk]

This has a certain energy that is impossible to describe yet I feel it charging through me.

[Dayran]

People may have done more things for that unique and gifted moment. A man may spent an entirely lifetime investing in a certain attitude, even if to discover that that's not it. He is finally certain. So that he may move on. A poem about a unique place in our feelings.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the word useage and the path it took was developed well!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Outstanding write, vocab stunning and
the flow is nice too...
love the message the most :)

[Groovy]

Great write

[Tim]

There's nothing like a poem stitched together with the thread of quality. This is an outstanding job. You reflect truths that have been compressed carefully to convey aspects of life we can examine, process and agree with. Great job with this one.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Outstanding and inspiring piece, great flow and energy. I enjoyed this very much. Nicely done.


~Anna Rose