I'm just me.

The tears stroll down my face

I feel alone , out of place

Judged  yet confused

Broken, but used

My soul is torn

My heart bruised

I look in the mirror and I hate what I see

Everything I said I wouldn't I turned out to be

My eyes stained with tears

From this pain i've delt with for all these years

I lay back in bed and listen to the rain drop on the tin

So many rain drops, So many sins

Is this my fate or is this my fiction

I am alone

I feel nothing, but distance

Why do you hate the person that I am??

Why do you hate me?

After all I am who I am and that's all I can be

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I LOVE THIS POEM.... it's going into my favorites!! I love how it just flows and the way you present it is brillant!!! It's sad when you don't like what you see when you look into the mirror... it's a struggle not to hate who you are because society tries to make us feel as if were not likeable if we aren't who society wants us to be... Great job!!

[Flow]

I don't know why others must tear down people, i think they are the one's lacking in many departments. I like this one again for the honesty and realness of it. Very good write

[Tania Leigh]

I'll have to thank Kristy for sending this along....this is very good. You conveyed so much emotion that just reaches out and grabs the reader's heart.

"Is this my fate or is this my fiction" Excellent play on words here. A wonderful write.

[D. Elizabeth]

I loved this piece, I have a piece similar to that of yours. It's obviously not the same. But I can relate to it. You did an amazing job, I loved the part " is this my fate, or is this my fiction?" Very cool. xo D.E.

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I think this is great! I loved the structure. It helped make your writing more powerful! I think you have a unique way with words!

[Brandon M. Whittaker]

Wow, I love the way you changed the fonts and added emphasis on certain words. This is a very good write and I was sucked right in. Awesome job!