Acoustics

Sitting in the bathroom you can hear

the sweet melody passing through your ears.

My fingers strum across the strings of my guitar,

I think I'll stick to acoustic before I go and rock hard.

 

I sit in here in the bathroom to get good acoustics

because this is the best place for me to think.

Yeah I know it sounds weird but thats just me

being the goofy musician I wanna be!

 

I love to play my guitar, I've played since I was a child

my passion for music blazes like a fire burning wild.

You should try this sometime, its good for the heart

but trust me, it gets better, this is just the beginning part.

Author's Note

my first poem..on here at least :P be nice..

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

Haha, I love how you rhyme your works just like mehhhhh! but i wrote two of those stanzas xD Hehe :3
anyway, I think the rhyming came out nice and the rhythm of the poem flowed very nicely! Grreat write Mariah, keep writing(: I wanna see some of your songs posted too!! My writerscafe friends will love em!!(: