Tears

Tears rushing like flood
No one to stop them
Revealing all the curses and sadness
No matter how precious thing i have.
Life is a journey to satisfaction and happiness
Not a stage for winning prestige and grandeur
Complexity in the world
And the conservative minds
Being a part of evil
Turn this world
The worst place to live in...

Author's Note

Expecting you all to understand the depth of words...

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This 'mine field' world of ours, with traps set by unscrupulous overlords, can be a difficult journey through life; good thing our inner strengths can see us overcome the tyrants! Great write (notice the date was 2017 - but true today as it was then) - interesting perspective - :-)

[Misty]

thank u so much for reviewing...

[AcasualPawn]

Beautifully written....
Life really is journey to satisfaction..

[Misty]

Thanks for your time..

[Ayushi Beura]

This is really one of the amazing work of yours!!! Loved to read ....As a poem it's really really worthful to read as some lines are so unique and new especially the last three lines !!! Except that I could guess that you are a very smiley personality girl...so may God never bring tears in ur eyes !!! 😘

[Misty]

Thanks a lot dear!!! I appreciate your words. Happy that you liked it.
thanks a lot for reading!!!

[reet]

Yeah it's very deep ,so deep i had to dig a tunnel and then read it ... Still can't get it's depthness ...

[writ rajat]

I understand the depth it is something seems to be real life experiences correct me if I am wrong

[Misty]

yes... sometimes life teaches us lessons that are hard to forget... thanks for reading..

[Najam Us Saher]

Correctly said about people who are narrow minded they really make life difficult for others. Honest poem I truly liked it.

[Misty]

thanks a lot for the review ....

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.