Warriors

It was the ending of a battle that they were winning. He stood on a cliff in front of the raging soldiers down at his feet. He breaths in smelling the blood rising in his body. He felt the pride of his win watching his men slay the remaining men of the opposing side. He took a big breath in before trembling the clouds with a yell of victory. His men screamed with his pride and shook the earth. He closes his eyes as the clouds part and the sun rests on his face while the sound of 

victory is tasted through the air. Victory was at last.

Author's Note

Honestly be as criticizing as you can. I need to improve.