The First Kiss

We kissed, our lips finally touched, things were never rushed,

As we headed downhill I thought, this must be godswill, 

Is this love real? I love how she made me feel...

Slow we go, toe to toe, where we stand, A simple plan,

no where to land,  A spark leaving it's mark in the dark,

this is the place it will all start, Hit with cupids dart.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar, Spelling.. Sorta short I know I haven't been doing much lately but I just sorta wanted to get something new up! Hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Helpless]

very sweet

[Poetic Beauty]

This is simple but explains those first moments in a very first kiss with someone.

[Kat Collins]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I would love to see it expanded! But it also captures the immediacy and sweetness of the first kiss. Good job....

[stars are far]

this is very romantic and well written
great job :)

[sarah]

awwwwwwwwwwww very romantic! and sweet

[donny ingraham]

Nicely written

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Terrific, written so nicely, it is short but it is simple and sweet, nice... caring, i love these words, and this write... the rhyming flow so great :)

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh my goodness!!! I love this poem so much. :) Great work and the romance is so beautiful.

[Lily Mae]

I thing you did a great job with it James.. It's all about the love and the journey..x