Methylphenidate

Methylphenidate

A Poem by Akira Kodama

You tricky f****r, you.
I don't think my colors are right,
Swishy swishy,
Swishy swashy,
Black to blue
Red to purple
Everything to everything...else.
I'm going to die
I'm going to f*****g die
My pulse is so wrong
My blood is boiling
But I feel so cold
Surely I'm going to die
I'll have a heart attack
I'm going to die
I'm gonna die
I'll die
Of course I'll die
Die
Die...

© 2013 Akira Kodama


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You give a really strong description and I can feel it through your poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is exactly how Ritalyn makes me feel. Good job on the description of this narcotic. The end line, though, seems too anticlimatic

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 29, 2012
Last Updated on February 17, 2013