But a Fragment

But a Fragment
By: Adam M. Snow

 

What is this picture, but a fragment
of life's shattered dream?
Being the lost that I am,
seeking a lifeless gleam.

 

T'was a night among nights,
arose the thoughts of me;
a vision appeared before my being,
drowning out the sea.

 

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Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. I am never quite sure of the meaning in most poems, but that's what makes it more magical and epic. It's personal yet full of connected wisdom. Your writing style is flawless and this is such a clear image in my mind. Soothing, searching, wandering...I'd give it a standing ovation. Well written, friend.

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you my dear friend

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

Wow, that was really good I liked it alot.

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

You're welcome:)

[Adam M. Snow]

^_^

[Renée]

OoOo I like this one..love the opened end...makes the mind wander..

[Texas Greg]

Hope to read your prose when I get more time. You seem to be full of thought and express it well. Please do more poems as I have A.D.D., lol. -Joke- time pressures...and there is so much inspiration out there. I just got inspired by your using a picture to write to and will browse images in Google now for the right one.
Thank-you!

Greg :-)

[Heather]

ohhhh, this poem is short, but captivating and dark. Hope that the fragment was just that, a fluttered thought that came and went. The imagery puts me right. Good work, dark but good.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Mockingbird]

sounds like someone deep in contemplation, trying to find themselves.

[Freedom's Child]

Good imagery, intense emotion especially for a short poem. Great work!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Eloha]

It sounds romantic, like something at the start of the era of Romanticism.

[Guardian of the Lost]

Short yet deep and well described... "Being the lost that I am, seeking a lifeless gleam." Simply elegant. Love it.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thanks for reading it

[Ghost of Jupiter]

short and sweet, wonderfully done!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Erin Thomas]

This is absolutely beautiful!!! Keep writing!!! I can't wait to read more!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you, I will