From the Depth of Eternal

From the Depth of Eternal

By: Adam M. Snow

 

From the depth of eternal,

where I dare lay;

I long for that which darkness covers.

I search myself night and day;

and I but a ghost who hovers.

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

This is good, man. I love how short your poetry is and the way it has this powerful impact behind it. You don't say anything more than what you have to and it really makes you focus and reread it a few times. It's like figuring out a puzzle, you know? This is just pure inner feelings. I appreciate it.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Haunting and enchanting. It makes me want to linger in some forest to help you search.

[realmwriter]

Impressive, so profound, yet so softly spoken. A perfectly painted, palpable picture of a poltergeist in pain.

[PokemonFan#1]

Magnificent, beautiful, and amazing! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Create a good vision. A ghost time must be long and interesting. Good description made the poem a pleasure to read. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stellar starkness.

[_]

short yet brilliant ah! you always come up with the best of poems.

[Jazique]

For such a simple poem with oh so much depth as the enternal life of sleep dose cover darkness with to which we find ourselves hunting the night. Anyways well done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Wow...
short, but there's SO much meaning in it!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

A short poem but with great power in each line. The flow is liberating and there's no hesitation in what you're trying to say. I can feel the darkness that allures to this and where we lay, the shadows will follow.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

I like these styles you have written. It is like a mystery in itself an old ancient piece of history left for us to figure out it's hidden secret!! You are really good at this.....please write some more and send!;))