Night of Ethereal

I heard a gentle tapping upon the night, Stirred up with a humble fright, As Darkness fallen upon my sight. his kindled lamp is my only light,

Night of Ethereal

By: Adam M. Snow

I heard a gentle tapping upon the night,

Stirred up with a humble fright,

As Darkness fallen upon my sight.

This kindled lamp is my only light,

Which flickers out till all is dark,

Which left upon me a kindled mark,

Which left me alone in a chamber murk,

Alone in a chamber cirque.

Not a candlelight to guide me,

Not a light to see.

I try that I must, but I cannot flee.

I try that I must to break free.

Out of my mouth sprung a whimper,

A plead with a simper,

As dark becomes a blur.

A Darkness as if it were,

Beseeched upon the nightfall.

No, beseeched upon enthral

By the Night of Ethereal,

By the Night of Sprawl.

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Kind of dark and very luring. Love the last two lines!
Keep it up!

[Amila Jay]

An excellent write and very dark, love it:-)

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its like you transported here magically and have the blood of shakespeare!!!! es un milagro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) wow another good thing about being born these days :)

[Demi Rose]

these poems of urs are just so enticing.

[VelvetRosetta]

Sort of feels like something Edgar Allan Poe would write...nicely done!

[PokemonFan#1]

I just LOVE reading poems that have lots of rhyming in it! I enjoyed it a lot!
Keep it up!

[Raven Starhawk]

I was hypnotized by this.

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Alone in a chamber cirque.
Not a candlelight to guide me,
Not a light to see.
I try that I must, but I cannot flee.
I try that I must to break free.
Out of my mouth sprung a whimper,
A plead with a simper,
As dark becomes a blur.
A Darkness as if it were,
Beseeched upon the nightfall.

This reminded me of having a nightmare...I remember many nights like this
Well written as always Adam, I really enjoy your style

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh so nice. Enjoyed... lovely.
Love this part, though all lines are brilliant with the flow and rhyming:
"As Darkness fallen upon my sight.
This kindled lamp is my only light,"

[Victoria Iankova]

This poem is very well written. I like it. And not only that but the whole idea of the poem is very interesting. The rhythm of the poem is flowing. I like it. You've done a very good job.