As Soulless as My Heart

As Soulless as My Heart

By: Adam M. Snow

Twinkle are the stars above me,

But they fade at my sight.

I've walked this road of death before,

But the feelings even heavier upon me.

I fornicate my sins betrothed,

I've tarnished my convalescence;

I be without seeing, as I cursed my essence,

As I curse my heart to death.

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Reviews

[Victoria Iankova]

I didn't catch the meaning but I like the way it sounds. Good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words leading the reader to a sad place. When life seem endless and no purpose. Easy to fall to sadness.
"I fornicate my sins betrothed,
I've tarnished my convalescence;"
I like the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote