Broken

I'm living

But I'm not all there

There's a part of me missing

The part that lets me love

All because you left me

For some other girl

Saying I'm not pretty enough

Laughing when I cry

Laughing at my heart shattering

When i begged for you back

You laughed

All because of you

I lost the will to love

Author's Note

honest opion

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

Straight from the heart. I can really feel the pain and seeing that your new this is a good start. Great write,

[Jonathan]

this poem is real as it gets i felt your soul on this one.

[The Last Poetic King]

Well the message is clear, and we all experiance heart break. But if he left you for another girl.. he probably wasn't worth your time.

[Global Norskie]

well written. emotional. simple message :)

[DeathByChoice]

Very nice, a lot of emotion in just a little piece and it's sad that there are people out there that actually put people through this sort of this.