Stars

A sliver disks shoots across the sky,

Laconic words fill my mind.

Thoughts tumble out as I dream of stars,

Clouds there to cushion me if I fall.

Plummeting down I look up once more,

To see your smile,

Stars galore.

Reviews

[NA]

Laconic...out with the dictionary again....a beautiful piece :)

[Soma-ko]

Thank you, and once again, it'll make much more sense when you find out its meaning.

[SyberRose]

Beautiful...and lovely images...Rose

[Soma-ko]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
I think you'll like the poem I just posted up, not sure if you will or not, but I think you will...