A Single Snow Globe

Look into her world, encased in glass.

Within the glass dome, encased a world of her own.
She held this town within her dainty hand,
Submerged in water, population was naught.
Fragile as it slipped through fingers like sand.

She kept her second world close to her heart,
As she shook her globe, and watched it snow,
She felt warmth, but not the heat from the sun
Dazzled with glitter her heart began to glow.

Enchanted by her world, she held it dear.
It is what held her love's soul, something so pure.
His essence in her globe, she would never forget,
For it was in her world in which they both met.

Author's Note

A bit choppy and 'meh'. Hope you enjoyed it, and if not, they tell me how to improve it. A random write.

Reviews

[SyberRose]

I thought this would shine being an abcb form...i enjoyed your theme Soma...Rose:)

Within the glass dome, encased a world of her own.
She held this town within her dainty hand,
Submerged in water, population was naught.
Fragile as it slipped through fingers like sand.

She kept her second world close to her heart,
As she shook her globe, and watched it snow,
She felt warmth, but not the heat from the sun
Dazzled with glitter her heart began to glow.

Enchanted by her world, she held it dear.
It is what held her love's soul, something so pure.
His essence in her globe, she would never forget,
For it was in her world in which they both met.

[Soma-ko]

I've actually never really used that form before, and it does seem better. Thanks for reading, the advise, and I'm glad you enjoyed it Srose. :)

[NA]

Beautifully done...loved it :) x

[Soma-ko]

Why thank you, glad to see you back, and happy you enjoyed it. :)