Your portrait screams

Night at a museum.

Framed in glazen gold,
a curvy crafted image.
Sun mist hair, a brazen bold;
Your passions timeless finish.

Those beaten, beaming, beckons;
From tarnished, tinted, turf.
Fuels, flame flecked intentions,
to embrace you on this earth.

Now my languid longings,
they must sputter to an end.
My minds echoed fawning,
of the girl who dropped my pen.

Author's Note

Would love to read your comments.

Reviews

[Mia]

That must have been some painting to inspire this.
"Your passions timeless finish."
Such a great line. I really enjoyed this poem.

[Somebrownnerd]

Thank you Mia! I really appreciate your review. There is a ton of different paintings and artists that inspire.

[Kelsey]

Oh my, this is amazing. It flows so wonderfully, it truly blows my mind. It's beautiful, and the idea is great. Lovely job, I truly enjoyed this poem.

[Chemical Kitten]

Wow, I absolutely love this poem! Great imagery, and nice flow. Short and sweet. I really like the ending too, to think someone you're infatuated with is actually just someone who dropped your pen. :)

[Somebrownnerd]

Thank you for your kind review. If someone/something can 'drop my pen' to paper, I cant help but be infatuated.

[Chris]

You had an interesting flow but I found I wanted more - to give it life and depth (to me)

[Somebrownnerd]

Thank you Chris, to an extent I actually agree with you. I feel as though there is a rather large jump between second and third stanza; A gap I need to fill in order to make the transition smoother. I appreciate the perspective.

[Chris]

I look forward to more of your work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

You're word choice is so , for lack of a better word, poetic and lovely. There is a nice, subtle story conveyed within these words of finding a muse with "Sun mist hair". Well done!
God Bless
~Mickey

[Somebrownnerd]

Thank you for the pleasant review. This poem is actually about a painting by Edvard Munch, she it was a random bit of writing. Again, thank you for taking the time to read my work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem at all:)