Starting Tonight.

Starting tonight,

with your arms around me tight,

I get lost in your embrace

as my fears all start to fade.

 

 

Starting tonight,

with the touch of your lips,

I will softly surrender,

I'll never say never.

 

 

Starting tonight,

you'll be the one I go to,

when nothing feels right,

I'll fall into you, without a fight.

 

 

Starting now,

you're the love of my life,

you're the air I breath in,

when I can't remember wrong from right.

 

 

Starting now,

as I look in your eyes,

I see them comfirm,

that this will be the start of the rest of my life.

Author's Note

Poem :D

Reviews

[Samantha (:]

This made me cry. I don't really know why... ): But I love it. I think this is my favorite thing by you. I just feel such a strong connection with it. I know once you get so close to someone it's like they're a part of you. Too bad that sometimes doesn't turn out the way you want it to. Great write, keep it up~

[hannajade]

what a nice poem! :) very romantic and smooth~!

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Smooth and precise! Good job!

[steph]

Starting tonight,
you'll be the one I go to,
when nothing feels right,
I'll fall into you, without a fight.

[Heather D]

I like the flow of this, it's very easy. I also like that your thoughts are short and simple. Great emotion, great poem :)

[Midnight_Mystery]

love this one..the flow of your words,and the emotion portrayed is really nice. well done Somer!

[Steven Cetta]

The first part of "Hold me tonight" I like both of these pieces. Emotions really drive the poetry.

[Karli]

aww cute:) and very touching! Hopefully we'll all find this happiness someday:) Great writing!:)