The eyes of our soul

They say our eyes

show the truth deep inside.

 

But what we see

When we look in the mirror?

In those eyes that seem our own

But are filled with so many emotions

That it hurts…

 

There are moments

When looking in your eyes

 Feels calm and relaxing

Still there are tears

That spill without our knowledge

And without our permission

Just because our eyes

Reflect deepest emotions

That we all have….

Reviews

[Leo]

Creative and original..I like the line "in those eyes that seem our own"..perhaps if you touched on the soul or mentioned the word soul anywhere just a suggestion..I like it!

[armin]

it's true our eyes show the deepest emotions and somehow the truth also.
Well worded.

armin. ..

[Saddam]

There are moments
When looking in your eyes
Feels calm and relaxing
Still there are tears.

It is valuable thought. Writing is very good and beautiful. good read dear friend.