Friends I used to have

Friends I used to have

A Poem by Kat24
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It is about people I used to hang with but I do not any more.

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Friends I used to have

My friends I used to hang with have

changed so much in the last few

years. They have changed by the way

they today being popular or just hanging with

different people that I thought

they would not hang with today.

Also, they can change by

being really nice to you and

then one day they are

being not nice to you at all.

 

© 2009 Kat24


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this is really good considering i know what you're talking about. We've all had that happen to us at one point or another. People change a lot, and can sometimes change for the better or for worse. Just a few things you can do. Think about the flow of the words and make sure you're being clear. Keep all of the emotion that you have in you're writing. You show plenty of that! Don't lose it. Keep doing well!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Change hits you when who knows. To why they say those childhood friendships that last forever are hard to find because when you set out into the world and look all around its impossible to not be effected by those close. So wonderful job on the perspective of "I use to have friends" I had many friends also the same and know others feel the same and you put it so well I must say "BRAVO!"

Posted 8 Years Ago


I now how you feel Kit Kat we'll make it through. I promise!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was said so simply, yet so perfect;y, that it rang out loud and clear for all. Many can relate. i know i can! I have lost many through the years. Some to wanting to just party all the time, while the body knows when enough is enough, and others to just changing their thinking, ways. Who knows, but all does change. You did great with this.

Mags xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


I've gone throw this too. At times it's hard to deal with but things get better in time. And i again agree with BlackRose about the flow of words and the emotion. Great Job! Keep It Up! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A message everyone can relate to. Good job Kat.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is really good and very true.. it is simple but very straight-forward.. keep it up...

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is really good considering i know what you're talking about. We've all had that happen to us at one point or another. People change a lot, and can sometimes change for the better or for worse. Just a few things you can do. Think about the flow of the words and make sure you're being clear. Keep all of the emotion that you have in you're writing. You show plenty of that! Don't lose it. Keep doing well!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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