Harry Potter books/ movies

Harry Potter books/ movies

A Poem by Kat24
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it is about harry potter and how much i like it

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Harry Potter book/ movie

I really like the Harry Potter books and movie

I like the way how they create them and make them

The newest movie just came out yesterday

I wonder how the movie will be

Good or Bad I guess we'll see

I think the movie will be really good like all the rest of them

If you are a big Harry Potter fan that is cool

Harry Potter is one of the best books and movie

I have ever read and saw

© 2010 Kat24


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As someone who used to be a huge HP fan, I liked this! You write very candidly about exactly what you think. There are a few ways I think you could improve this. Mainly, try to use more interesting words than just the basic phrases that convey what you're thinking. Maybe describe the excitement of some of the scenes and how it makes your heart race, or the plot thickening until it squeezes you, or something like that. Also, the last sentence should been "I have ever read and seen." You wouldn't say "One of the best movie I have ever saw"; you'd say "one of the best movies I have ever seen."

Posted 9 Years Ago


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RJM
Nice dedication to HP. I see that you're huge fan of it! I just watch the movies though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes this was an excellent dedication to Harry Potter series and yes they are all good just as you have said above. Good write and dedication :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderfully done Kit. Read the books and saw the movies. I think it is the greatest out there. Imaginations is such a wonderful thing. How we get lost in it is amazing. Fine job here my gal.

Mags xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not allowed to watch or read the books

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wow good you feel the enthusiasm. I saw the resent movie and it was good. Little said about duby but hey atleast he went out as a hero.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this poem because it's descriptively in-tribute, and i don't recall seeing or reading Harry Potter, but reading this poem makes me feel like a fan
and I can definitely respect it, Great job on this kat. Clear and defined.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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