Your eyes so misty blue

Sweet woman! Thou art a precious jewel in love’s bright crown. Your kiss spins my heart ’round and ’round; I never ever want to come down.

Take my hand,
and off we go,
on silver clouds
our love does flow,
I dive in you,
you dive in me,
as one we rise,
forever free.
our hearts sprout wings,
as heaven sings a song for me and you,
my joy so grand,
I take thy hand,
your eyes so misty blue.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

A flight of fancy written in sweet harmony!

[Vaidehi]

Lovely!

[Shayla Sayer]

wow. i really like it. it reminds me of something my boyfriend would write...
greeaat write.

[Miss Fox]

You know, I always admire a person who can rhyme in a poem. I'm terrible with it. But in spite of being restricted by rhyming, you create a darling poem. Congrats.

And I also like it 'cause my eyes are blue :3