You See Today Was My Wedding Day

You See Today Was My Wedding Day

A Chapter by StarSandwich
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You see today was Rosetta's wedding day. Today she should have been Queen.

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You see todays my wedding day, in this spring time glow, my dress so white its stands to gazed. Today i should be happy, but yet i feel so sad, my memories always to far but today they are so near. My father always said I was special, one day I would be queen. He told me all these stories about two princes that would one day fight. My love is what they wanted, but my answers gave nothing away.
For today is my wedding day, today I will be Queen. Every one will love me, I will be cherished by all. No this inst some sort of dream this is no lullaby, this is real no fantasy involved.  But yet today my lover had an objection, For I should not marry today, for another loves me mores strongly. I stand tall in my wedding dress today as I watch my grooms fright away, with swords in there hands, deadly swings. Never ever will a battle be this way. Its Prince of darkness Vs the Prince of light they say, for a woman called Rosetta they say. They swung and heaved there mighty swords,  with the intent to kill the other. I never played them I'd say, but I always did. Saying "I love" no wonder there both fighting today.
You see todays my wedding day. Today i should smile and laugh, today I'll stand and cry. My lover and my fiancée fight for my love, for my marriage. My light and my darkness they fight at the alter. There swords plunge, I'm still standing all alone. They both appear wounded both swords in there chests, this could be a real Russian roulette. Both of them fall, both of them bleed. They both stare in to my eyes, with such pleading gazes. I hold there hands as there blood flows, my darkness and my light. My tears that fall, out of love or hate. Or For what have I have become. I say I love them, I kiss them both as I watch there life fade away. 
You see today was Rosetta's wedding day. Today she should have been Queen. She should have married the Prince of Light but yet she played with the Darkness in her heart. Two princes had a fight today for a woman called Rosetta some say. Three body lay at an alter they came to such an early grave, two with swords in there chests, one with a dagger in the heart.


© 2011 StarSandwich


Author's Note

StarSandwich
Probably spelling problems, ect. It maybe confusing but I'm getting into writing things that are confusing x3

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"this could be a real Russian rulette." I love that line. A love triangle of the two sides. Nicely done. I like how it's told and I like how it has a message lurking behind it. Another good piece as usual from you :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A twisted tale of a love triangle. Nicely done dear.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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TJ
this is very good. in the beginning i thought it read very jerky but as i read on and got a better feel for the piece i saw that jerky feeling really worked with this piece and in the end was really helpful!
good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol this si great !! keep on writing stories that end confusing cause you are great at it !!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hehee obsessing over them a lot lately.. Its come second nature APOSTROPHES xD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very interesting, she should have made them stop ! It wasn't nice at all dx LOOOL. Anyways, i liked it was good. This kinda bugs me a bit but c'mon put in the apostrophe's !!! LOOOL.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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