Lie to me darling.

Lie to me darling,

tell me a lie.

Tell me you love me,

or prepare to die.

 

Tell me you need me,

thats where you belong.

Tell me you need me,

I dont want to be wrong.

 

They think you hate me,

tell them its not true.

Were suppost to be together,

just me and you.

 

Author's Note

Spelling error :P Probably!! cba with spell checker will do it later :P

Reviews

[C.]

I love this c: short and to the point and very interesting

[London]

loved this! keep writing my friend

[Babieegirl]

what a wonderful poem, scary still a bit.. o.o hahah

[Maimai]

I like it :) Short and powerful, the last stanza gives a Romeo and Juliet feeling.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Short and simple, but very powerful, nicely done.

[Sukriti Suki]

hmmmm....wanting to hear a lie otherwise you die....many interpretations here. Lovely simplistic use of words.

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow I really like this. I didn't really get the psychotic girlfriend image that TJ got. I got the impression of a woman really needing their partner to be there for them and to be able to express that love for the rest of the world to see. The reason why the write came over so strong is because the writer is upset that her lover cannot seem to do either of these things. But that is just my take. Excellent write!!

[TJ]

man reading this i pictured some crazy girl with a gun to some poor guys head. I don't know if thats what you intended or not but I have to say, this envoked very good and very precise imagery!

[guiltyascharged]

Oh, this is so sweet! You're such a good poet! I've been through this... Again and again and again and.. I lost what I was trying to get to with that :P

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very sweet romantic poem, great write:)