Not My Soul Mate

You let me fall into the darkness,

You filled me with such sadness, 

You caused me all this madness.

For you where my devil King,

the on who gave me this loving ring.

I asked you for you're love,

something that was sent from above,

I ended giving you the shove.

For now It is to late,

You cannot be my soul mate.

Author's Note

-Wrote it last night on a note pad.... You'll probably hear madness and sadness alot I like the words ^_^

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is perfectly sad. Well done ^.^

[guiltyascharged]

Omg. I almost teared up. So sad yet so beautiful. Amazing write, bravo!

[DONALD EISSLER]

nice way to release your anger with words written enjoyed as we al have been there at sometime
tk

[brenda]

aaaw:( sad poem but love it all the same :)

[halflives]

Well done! I liked the images played in our minds while reading. Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Brilliant piece of poetry :)

[Thea]

With a very good flow...Nice rhyming, like this a lot! Keep writing... :)